Amazing Writng

In Room 2 we have being working on our sentences, power words (adjectives, onomatopoeia, adverbs and hooks). We have being talking about how when we read the writer uses there descriptions to create a picture in our mind as we read. This was our mission!!!

This week we used Kahu as our 'expert' and he was an expert on Kite surfing. We watched a video of his family holiday to Rarotonga and the kite surfing they did. Our task was to create a picture in our reader’s mind of how we would feel during our imaginary kite surfing experience.

Below is the video we watched of Kahu's Families kite surfing adventure!!

Over the week I am hoping to share some of the stories the children have written for your to read. We were all very proud of our work.

'I was in the water I felt excited. I started to do some kite loops it was lots of fun. My kite hit the water because I did to many kite loops. Sometimes I go with my Dad between his legs and I go across to the other island' - By Kahu